主题：请教各位英语达人儿童诗翻译Now we are six -- 国林风

When I was One, 当我一岁时

I had just begun. 我是花骨朵

When I was Two, 当我两岁时

I was nearly new. 我是蚕宝宝

When I was Three 当我三岁时

I was hardly me. 我还不是小蝴蝶

When I was Four, 当我四岁时

I was not much more. 我变，我变，我变变变

When I was Five, I was just live. 当我五岁时，我变成孙猴子啦

But now I am Six, I'm as clever as lever, 现在我6岁了，我像齐天大圣一样聪明

So I think I'll be six now for ever and ever 所以我一直要当六小龄童

一个朋友的娃元旦汇演，表演英语诗朗诵，想英语念完画蛇添足翻译一下，不求特别信达雅，但求有趣。表演娃是6岁男孩。

我胡乱翻译了一下，对最后一句特别不满意。各位达人对整个翻译有没有更好地建议？

先谢过了！

初度始懵董

孩提学语迟

垂髫骑竹马

悠忽总角至

一岁才起步，

两岁新宝宝，

三岁还懵懂，

四岁木有进步，

五岁刚开始活着，

六岁了，

我聪明得都不像啥了，

我要现在、一直、永远都六岁。

When I was One,

吾成初岁

I had just begun.

性始蒙开

When I was Two,

及于二载

I was nearly new.

新禾未艾

When I was Three

三秋忽转

I was hardly me.

弗再故我

When I was Four,

四载之行

I was not much more.

才情已没

When I was Five, I was just alive.

五岁既来，苟活于世

But now I am Six, I'm as clever as clever,

六龄殊众，且颖且聪

So I think I'll be six now for ever and ever

余喜斯年，循此终生

望尘莫及。

但是三岁和四岁的两段似乎不确。不过说真的，我并没有足够的童心来理解这首诗，我觉得你的译文比原诗要好多了，原诗有点莫名其妙的。

When I was One, 一岁我小小，

I had just begun. 走路老摔交。

When I was Two, 两岁话少少，

I was nearly new. 只会瞎胡叫。

When I was Three 三岁个不高，

I was hardly me. 还要妈妈抱。

When I was Four, 四岁常发烧，

I was not much more. 因为总感冒。

When I was Five, 五岁没头脑，

I was just live. 啥也不知道。

But now I am Six, 今年我六岁，

I'm as clever as clever 聪明不得了。

So I think I'll be six now 六岁你真好，

for ever and ever 六岁你别跑！

造出来滴。。。

如果觉得英文太直白不过瘾，干脆把你创作的这个翻译成英文给娃背得了。。。。

才情已没 感觉不舒服，改成 才情未茂

五岁既来，苟活于世 改成 五岁既来，懵懂年少