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It's reported 2 pilots dead and one was missing.

It's reported 2 pilots dead and one missing.

They said it's huge and there were Dollar found in the crashed site too

1)"there were Dollar found...", 应为 "there were dollar bills found...". 另, "were"应接复数,不能接dollar.错上加错

2)"on the site", not "in the site"

3) "crash site", not "crashed site"

...being delivered to there

...being delivered there

...to checked their cellphones.

1)...to check their cellphones

2) 什么叫"to check their cellphones"? to hand in their cellphones (上交手机)?

are in place at all levels of reporting, details of aircraft belonging to the U.S. Global Hawk "unmanned reconnaissance machine in the coastal areas in China over the missile was locked into being after the Lishui Lishui district militia Red Hawk air defense missiles once again."

什么乱七八糟的...

结论:...结论是显而易见的.

另外,我点回复时只看见两个语法错误,结果越该越多.最后两段更是没法读. 大家看看把,肯定还有很多错误.

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